Freezing rain
Late winter—
pines still in deep green,
sap frozen
Birds and twigs of a
big ol' tree,
rattling in the icy rain,
molded dead
A branch drops its needles
to the earth—
needles under heaven,
under icy rain,
gnawing into coral breasts,
with incest teeth
©Conrad DiDiodato 2008
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3 comments:
Pretty cool metaphor you used to descrive freezing rain. Feel free to post some of your poetry on my website. Peace
Hello Jon!
I see you've chosen my poem to comment on. But I have not given you or anyone permission to use my poem for discussion in other blogs. So for reasons of copyright infringement, could you please delete both my poem and your comments from your blog.
Thank you very much for your cooperation.
Conrad
Jon,
as I said in my previous post, by printing my poem in your blog without my permission you have violated 'copyright'.I did not give you permission to use it. Please remove my poem "Freezing rain" from your 'Poetry' blog with comments immediately.
If you do not, I will proceed with an Infringement Notification to Blogger.
Conrad
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